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What are some effective strategies for writing clear and compelling messaging?

This is something I've been struggling with since becoming a PMM
Caroline Walthall
Caroline Walthall
Quizlet Director of Product and Lifecycle Marketing | Formerly UdemyMay 17
  • A few rapid fire thoughts on writing clear and compelling messaging:

    • Start by writing your messages in simpler plain English and don’t worry too much about how it sounds yet

    • Ask yourself, “so what,” and “who cares?” Does it pass the sniff test?

    • If not, make sure the message taps into at least one value prop or benefit that matters to your target customer

    • If not, make sure the message ties to an insight you know about your users

    • If not, ask yourself if that feature or product or positioning angle is even worth mentioning, 50-75% of the time it won’t be

    • Edit and cut ruthlessly as you go

    • Put your simple messages into an LLM or send them to a copywriter for alternatives

    • Start to become more obsessive about word choice and removing extraneous words

    • Squint and make sure you’re not getting too “cute” or “technical” or “insert adjective that takes you further from the way real people think and talk”

    • Get feedback on it from prospective customers

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